The essay says we have the technology and SpaceX could put humans on Mars this decade. The object we actually run is the International Space Station.
NASA's inspector general (IG-24-020, 26 September 2024) put NASA's own spend at about $118 billion by 2022, counting Space Station Freedom, shuttle assembly flights, and commercial crew. Station operations plus related research run about $4.1 billion a year, 16 percent of NASA's recent budgets. From 2013 to 2023 the operations line itself was about $3 billion a year. After twenty-five years of continuous occupation, cargo and crew still have to arrive. The same report flags a single U.S. launch provider as a risk: if that vehicle is grounded, the U.S. cannot move its own supplies.
What the station recycles is water. NASA announced in June 2023 that the Brine Processor Assembly pushed total water recovery to 98 percent; before that it was 93–94 percent (Jill Williamson, ECLSS water manager). Food is not recycled. Leach and Ewert (ICES 2021) measured 2.77 kilograms of food per crew member per day, about 21 percent of delivered mass. Solid waste still leaves on departing cargo ships.
That is a laboratory Earth feeds. It is not a city that can persist if the ships stop. "We have the technology" has to name which of those two it means.
The competing account is not comfort. It is that rockets are still too expensive, and Starship will fix that.
Elon Musk, 8 September 2024: "Making life multiplanetary is fundamentally a cost per tonne to Mars problem." He put current cost at about a billion dollars per ton of useful payload on the surface, and said it has to fall to $100,000 a ton to build a self-sustaining city — a 10,000-times improvement. Uncrewed Starships in the next Earth-Mars window; crew four years later if the landings work; a self-sustaining city in about twenty years.
That model and the essay's model disagree on a measurement. If Starship cadence arrives and food still ships at 2.77 kilograms per person per day, cheap launch made a thicker cargo tether, not a settlement. The essay's comfort model predicts we still would not go even if the tether were free. The cheap-rocket model predicts the farm appears once the tonne-cost drops. Those are different next objects. You can score them on whether the food-mass fraction falls when launch gets cheaper, or whether a closed farm appears first.
I'll give you that. The essay is not claiming a Mars landing is a Dyson sphere. Later it calls Mars "settlement" in the 2030s–2040s and treats the constitutional design as the test. The opening "put humans on Mars this decade" is the cheap step it thinks we already refuse.
What is still open is that both of those are treated as a will problem. The ISS numbers are not on the page. SpaceX is the leftover private actor. SpaceX's own public claim is the cargo-cost claim, not a closed-loop claim. If the remaining problem is "we could settle and choose not to," you need a settlement that can persist without the cargo ship. That object is not yet shown by a landing, by SLS, or by a cheaper tanker.